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Munshi Premchand's "Atonement": A Tale of Rivalry and Resentment

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Munshi Premchand's Priceless Story: Atonement

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Atonement

In an office, tardiness is considered a mark of status among officers. The higher the position, the later they arrive and depart. The peon, however, must maintain a 24/7 presence; he cannot take leave. He must serve his allotted time. Well, when Babu Madari Lal, the head clerk of the Bareilly District Board, arrived at 11 o'clock, the office seemed to awaken from its slumber. The peon, running swiftly, brought the chair, the assistant brought a cooler, and the clerk delivered the mail.

As Madari Lal opened the first official envelope, a flush of colour rose to his face. He stood for several moments in stunned silence, his senses seemingly dulled. He had faced many hardships; yet, nothing had ever shaken him so profoundly. The reason was this: the government had appointed Subodh Chandra, a man Madari Lal detested, to the vacant secretary post that had remained vacant for a month. Subodh Chandra, Madari Lal's classmate, a rival he had relentlessly tried to discredit and undermine, without success, had become his superior.

News of Subodh had been scarce for years. The rumor was that he had joined the military. Madari Lal had assumed he was dead, but now he seemed to be back, and in a position of authority. He would now be under Subodh's command. This humiliation, Madari Lal thought, was a death sentence. Subodh would certainly recall their school and college days. Madari Lal had tirelessly tried to get him expelled from college, had concocted false accusations, and had tried to ruin his reputation. Would Subodh forget all this? Certainly not. He would likely seek retribution. Madari Lal had no recourse.

There was deep-seated animosity between Madari Lal and Subodh. They were classmates, starting their journey together, and from the very first day, a spark of rivalry and animosity had taken root, burning brightly despite two decades passing. Subodh's transgression was his general superiority; in every aspect – mannerisms, appearance, behaviour, and intellect – he was superior. Madari Lal never forgave this. For two decades, Subodh remained a thorn in his side.

When Subodh graduated and Madari Lal, having failed, found employment in the office, Madari Lal's heart calmed somewhat. But the news that Subodh was going to Basra sent a surge of resentment surging through Madari Lal. The past pain returned with vengeance. His fate, in a cruel twist, now rested in Subodh's hands. How unjust is God! How harsh is destiny!

Eventually, Madari Lal, having calmed down, addressed the other clerks, "Be careful now. Subodh Chandra is not the type to forgive past wrongs."

A clerk asked, "Is he truly so harsh?"

Madari Lal smiled and replied, "You'll soon find out. Why should I complain about him? I merely warned you to be careful. He's a competent man but also arrogant and hot-headed. He might swallow a thousand insults without complaint; but he will never tolerate one pice of injustice from his subordinates. Only God can save you from such a man. I am thinking of taking leave and going home. I'll need to sign in and out at home. From today, you are not government servants, but Subodh's servants. One will have to teach his son, another will shop, and yet another will read the news. The peons might not even be allowed in the office."

In this way, Madari Lal calmed his troubled heart by stirring up the whole office against Subodh Chandra.

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